Migdnight bell
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 Image by [valentinalvarez](https://pixabay.com/es/users/valentinalvarez-6455986/) in [Pixabay](https://pixabay.com/) ---------------------------- Being my first entry, I thought I could write a few words other than the -- quite short-- poem. I believe all good stories have a background or context we don't always get to know, but that is always there. In this case, I wrote this poem after a heart break, about 5 years ago. Was living alone -- surrounded by people and still lonely--, in a shelter, no friends, no TV, no internet... The best context for writing. Please tell me what you think. All constructive criticism welcome. ---------------------------- The clock strikes midnight. Another day has gone by, without her scent, without her smile. On a crumpled piece of paper he writes his last goodbye. "Forever yours", he reads, and tears it apart. A dim light is all that sheds upon the bench on which he sits. His broken heart holds nothing else than a hopeless man's last wish. His tearful eyes stare into the endless night, to whatever god may care he utters a mournful cry. "I beg you, please, bring her back, give me one last kiss, give me one last hug".
👍 portugalzin,