What a charming story, @treasure-joshua. The narrator has a strong "voice" which gives the story a great foundation. The colorful characters, and the many different ways in which preconceived ideas are torn apart really make this an interesting and vibrant tale. 

Thanks for sharing your story in The Ink Well and for reading and commenting on the work of other community members!

When you get a chance, check out our article, [Help for the Grammatically Challenged](https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@theinkwell/writing-tip-of-the-week-30-help-for-the-grammatically-challenged), which provides important tips on how to use Google Docs to draft your stories. It will point out errors that need to be fixed, and you can fix them by clicking on them. It's a great way to draft and check over your stories before pasting the content into a post on Hive to improve your writing!