@bigsteff

You gave a good solid effort in this entry
You gave us original lyrics with a bit of hip hop flow
and sang for us a cover song that I don't think anyone else in the contest covered
Which was nice to hear for a change
I appreciate your happy energy, good vibes and stylish flowing
Of course you have things to improve on
The tone and rhythm were slightly off for the singing, but don't worry
Your vocal tone is still being developed and you are still learning your range
Your rap was actually pretty thoughtful and shows your creative potential
Keep focusing on that area for future entries
Keep practicing, sharing and performing
And continue having fun!

I would like to see you keep improving

Check out this guide I wrote to help you improve your future entries

https://hive.blog/hive-140169/@verbal-d/official-cut-off-time-post-for-vibes-week-14-entries-cest-10-am-june-29th-2024-this-post-includes-entry-guidlines-for-new

-***@Verbal-D: Gospel Musician/Rapper/Singer/Songwriter & Official Vibes Judge***