From what I've learned and seen so far is the people who make the most money on here get very personal about themselves and their lives. What I would suggest you do is make a introduction post. If you need a example look at mine https://steemit.com/introduceyourself/@wix/hello-steemit-this-is-my-introductoin
A picture with a piece of paper with your account name and date is very important, letting people know that your a real person and not some bot or some one pretending to be someone else.